100 word chalenge

I my 44 years of living on this earth I have never taken a risk. Taking risks can equal to death. And, I think to myself is that really worth it. I see people jump off buildings and break their legs. But they just keep doing it. But sometimes I see people succeed. Then, I think to myself, why cant I do that? Then I think to myself they make it look so easy and if I try what if I don’t succeed? Its just sometimes not worth the risk.

 

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http://antsclass.global2.vic.edu.au/2015/07/26/100-word-challenge-2/

 

One thought on “100 word chalenge

  1. Great Job Mali,

    I think it is a very good way on using the prompt.
    I also like how you have put in questions so your readers can stop and think about it.
    One thing you could work on is your punctuation.

    From Malia

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